I enjoyed your pictures for the project, but I need some information to help me understand your thought process. Without information, I cannot really understand some of your pictures. I do enjoy your picture for movement, with the water moving in the background, and I like the shape picture of the basketball. I do not understand some, like the space picture. I understand that the empty space on the wall in the background is what you maybe intended, but why did you chose that picture? I feel like there could be more information to give us. Some more time spent on the project would have made it much stronger. Good job, though!
Although I enjoyed your theme of the family, nature and love it missed out on the specifics of the assignment which included elements and principles. Keep trying though,I’m not being condescending when I say that your efforts will improve your work. I find myself struggling but this post affirms my own improvement. Good job.
I enjoy your photobook. I think It is a perfect way to demonstrate arts in living. We are surrounded by art and I think it is important to show appreciation to some of those minor details in life that we miss out on. I also liked your photobook because I think it had a very abstract way of representing the elements and principles
I enjoyed your pictures for the project, but I need some information to help me understand your thought process. Without information, I cannot really understand some of your pictures. I do enjoy your picture for movement, with the water moving in the background, and I like the shape picture of the basketball. I do not understand some, like the space picture. I understand that the empty space on the wall in the background is what you maybe intended, but why did you chose that picture? I feel like there could be more information to give us. Some more time spent on the project would have made it much stronger. Good job, though!
ReplyDeleteHey ! thanks so much for the feedback. I included the descriptions for each picture in Module 3's blog post.
DeleteI feel that all these pictures really resemballed their values and Elements!
ReplyDeleteAlthough I enjoyed your theme of the family, nature and love it missed out on the specifics of the assignment which included elements and principles. Keep trying though,I’m not being condescending when I say that your efforts will improve your work. I find myself struggling but this post affirms my own improvement. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI enjoy your photobook. I think It is a perfect way to demonstrate arts in living. We are surrounded by art and I think it is important to show appreciation to some of those minor details in life that we miss out on. I also liked your photobook because I think it had a very abstract way of representing the elements and principles
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